Many students think that the number one stolen item at UF is
their electronics; although, the number one item stolen on campus is students’
bicycles. Bike theft is a problem on the University of Florida campus because
students are constantly getting their bikes stolen even though they are locked
up and secure. Students are doing everything right when they lock up their bike
but it is still getting taken and this is a problem at the University of
Florida that needs to come to an end. Many students leave their bikes locked up
right outside of their dorm rooms and they will come out the next morning and
find out that their bike is stolen. These bikes are being stolen in the middle
of the night when everyone is sleeping and when security around campus is not
expecting it. Any student at UF with a bike needs to make sure that they lock
their bike up because anyone with a bike can be at risk. The main cause of this
problem is that students don’t have the correct lock for their bike. Many
students tend to buy the cheaper locks because they don’t know that bike theft
is a problem. However, students that have the “U-lock” are at less of a risk
because this lock is practically impossible to break and thieves will go after
bikes that don’t have the “U-lock.” The “U-lock” is 13 mm of steel lock that is
shaped like the letter U and is resistant against bolt cutter and other forms
of destruction that the robbers use. Therefore, making security of the bike
greater can prevent bike theft. The effect that bike theft has on students
leaves them in a phase of anguish and distress. If a student gets his or her
bike stolen they are left confused as to why their bike got stolen and who
stole the bike. After getting their bike stolen many students have a hard time
finding transportation around campus. If this problem is solved students of UF
can feel safe and this campus can be a safe place to have your bike. Students
will not be worried about their bike getting stolen and they can be able to
know that their bike will be there when they need it. The police department is
trying to stop this problem, however, there are still bikes being stolen. The
university police department goal is “to preserve a safe secure campus
environment where diverse social, cultural and academic values are allowed to
develop and prosper through a combination of reactive, proactive and
educational law enforcement services.” However, they are failing to live up
their goal of providing “a safe secure campus environment” because students
don’t feel safe locking up their bike. If the police department puts more time
and effort into this issue then the problem can be solved. The police
department needs to make this a priority and this problem will be solved with
this extra effort. This is a problem that can be easily solved with extra
security, time and effort.
A practical solution to this problem would require that students have the "U-lock" and register their bike with the police department. The police department will register everyone bike for free and put a tracking device on the bike. With the tracking device anyone will be able to find the bike if it gets stolen. If the bike has the "U-lock" and is registered with the UFPD I think that all the bikes will be safe and secure.
ReplyDelete1. What is the broader topic that the author proposes is a problem?
The broader topic is theft and the specific topic is bike theft at UF.
2. How does the author define that topic? State that definition here.
Bike theft is a serious issue at the University of Florida and needs to be taken seriously.
3. Is there a readily identifiable thesis statement which states the problem and reasons in a because claim?
Yes. Bike theft is a serious issue because students are getting their bikes stolen even though they are locked up.
4. How is the problem contextualized?
The problem has been going on for some time, the UFPD has tried to stop this problem but it hasn't been successful and the consequences of this problem are students are left without transportation and their property is stolen.
5. Is the problem topic specific and located in the smallest possible category?
Yes. Bike theft at the University of Florida
6. Is the problem unique? If the topic is popular, does the problem statement offer a new interpretation of the common problem?
I think that this problem is unique to students at UF.